That was creepy and weird. It had sort of an Alice in wonderland feel to it. I'm not 100% sure I fully understood everything being honest. Was it pretend? Was it a dream? Or did it all actually happen? I guess those questions mean that the story was a success because it got me wondering. Almost a dark fairy tale, a modern day Grimm. Worth a read.
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